Comments on: Writing Tips: 10 Mistakes to avoid http://booksbywomen.org/writing-tips-10-mistakes-avoid/ Tue, 11 Apr 2017 13:51:56 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.5.3 By: Sue Crampton http://booksbywomen.org/writing-tips-10-mistakes-avoid/#comment-48568 Tue, 11 Apr 2017 13:51:56 +0000 http://booksbywomenorg.netfirms.com/?p=11982#comment-48568 Sound advice.I’m struggling with making second draft more cohesive and exciting.

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By: 10 Ways To Kick Start Your Writing : Women Writers, Women's Books http://booksbywomen.org/writing-tips-10-mistakes-avoid/#comment-46957 Sat, 05 Dec 2015 10:16:07 +0000 http://booksbywomenorg.netfirms.com/?p=11982#comment-46957 […] in the life of… Joanne Harris The Power of Dark Stories, and Why we Are Not Always What we Write Writing Tips: 10 Mistakes to Avoid Follow her on twitter @joannechocolat or visit her website Joanne-Harris.co.uk […]

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By: April Munday http://booksbywomen.org/writing-tips-10-mistakes-avoid/#comment-46909 Tue, 24 Nov 2015 12:37:23 +0000 http://booksbywomenorg.netfirms.com/?p=11982#comment-46909 Really useful and practical – just what you’d expect from such an experienced writer.

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By: Friday Finds: Week 59 | Avid Reader http://booksbywomen.org/writing-tips-10-mistakes-avoid/#comment-46876 Sun, 15 Nov 2015 01:03:19 +0000 http://booksbywomenorg.netfirms.com/?p=11982#comment-46876 […] Writing Tips: 10 Mistakes Avoid […]

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By: Hilary Coombes http://booksbywomen.org/writing-tips-10-mistakes-avoid/#comment-32075 Wed, 26 Nov 2014 16:54:24 +0000 http://booksbywomenorg.netfirms.com/?p=11982#comment-32075 Your list of writing tips has been so useful. Many thanks. I only wish I had read and taken on board number 2 before I began work on my first novel. A lot of deletion took place afterwards, as I’d ‘over described’ facial expressions to death. So much to learn . . .

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By: Victoria King-Voreadi http://booksbywomen.org/writing-tips-10-mistakes-avoid/#comment-21090 Tue, 26 Aug 2014 12:06:20 +0000 http://booksbywomenorg.netfirms.com/?p=11982#comment-21090 I agree that there can be too much metaphor, or at very least there should be some caution in its use. I’ve always felt that the most crucial element is to engage the reader in what’s happening rather than trying to “impress” them with your clever use of imagery.

I Keep a notebook of “free radical” clever phrases that I can flip through from time to time if I get stuck. It serves a few purposes: on the one hand I’ve recorded them so my terror of forgetting something so “brilliant” won’t tempt me to force that bit into some poor unrelated character’s mouth, on the other those bits of random inspiration can help trigger other ideas. Then again sometimes it is just funny to sit and read them and wonder “What on earth was I thinking!?”

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By: Kate Foster http://booksbywomen.org/writing-tips-10-mistakes-avoid/#comment-19184 Tue, 15 Jul 2014 00:44:30 +0000 http://booksbywomenorg.netfirms.com/?p=11982#comment-19184 This is a brilliant list of writing tips. I love number 4. I once read a book, well the first couple of chapters actually, where the author pointlessly replaced body parts with the strangest choices. For example, fingers were digits and hand sausages and legs were pillars! Perhaps he needed a Thesaurus!

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